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Talking Heads
Flags 6+ consecutive dialogue paragraphs without narrative grounding.
What It Does
Counts consecutive dialogue-only paragraphs. When six or more dialogue paragraphs appear without intervening narration, action, or description, it fires.
Why It Matters
Extended dialogue without physical grounding creates "talking heads" — characters floating in a void. Readers need periodic anchoring through gesture, setting, or internal reaction to stay spatially oriented.
What Gets Flagged
| Severity | Example | Why | Suggested Revision |
|---|---|---|---|
| Hint | 8 dialogue paragraphs in a row | No physical context | Insert an action beat or sensory detail every 3-5 lines |
Technical Details
- Source:
prose-craft - Scope: Scene-level
- Method: ParagraphKind::Dialogue streak counting