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Dialogue

Said-ism Soup

Flags exotic dialogue tags that are used so often they lose their impact.

What It Does

Tracks 50+ exotic dialogue tags (exclaimed, whispered, growled, stammered, etc.) and flags any that appear 3+ times. Excludes "said", "asked", and "replied" which are designed to be invisible.

Why It Matters

An exotic tag used once is colorful. Used four times, it's a tic. "She exclaimed" is eye-catching the first time, but by the fifth, the reader is noticing the tag instead of the dialogue.

What Gets Flagged

Severity Example Why Suggested Revision
Information "exclaimed" appears 4 times Readers start noticing the tag Use "said" or replace with action beats

Configuration

No configuration options. Threshold: 3+ uses of the same exotic tag.

Technical Details

  • Source: prose-craft
  • Scope: Document-level frequency analysis
  • Method: Keyword counting in dialogue-containing lines