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Paragraph End-Weight
Flags paragraphs that end on weak, low-energy words like prepositions or pronouns instead of strong nouns or verbs.
What It Does
Examines the very last token of each paragraph. Flags if it's a preposition, determiner, particle, personal pronoun, or other function word.
Why It Matters
Paragraphs are rhythmic units. The final word carries disproportionate weight — it's the last thing the reader processes before pausing. Ending on a content-rich noun or active verb creates a satisfying rhythmic landing. Ending on "at," "to," "it," or "with" creates a fizzle.
What Gets Flagged
| Severity | Example | Why | Suggested Revision |
|---|---|---|---|
| Hint | "...the painting she had been staring at." | Ends on preposition "at" | "...the painting that held her gaze." |
Configuration
No configuration options. Skips paragraphs shorter than 10 words.
Technical Details
- Source:
prose-craft - Scope: Paragraph-level
- Method: Last token POS analysis; flags prepositions, determiners, particles, personal pronouns