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Ghosted Characters

Flags characters who are introduced early in a scene but vanish for 800+ words without mention.

What It Does

Tracks all character mentions across a scene and identifies characters who are mentioned at least twice in the first half of the scene but never reappear in the last 800+ words.

Why It Matters

Readers build mental models of who is "on stage." When a character disappears without explanation, readers wonder: did they leave? Are they still standing there silently? This ambiguity damages immersion and spatial coherence.

What Gets Flagged

Severity Example Why Suggested Revision
Hint Character "Marcus" mentioned in paragraphs 1-3 but absent from paragraphs 4-20 800+ word gap Add a brief mention or exit line for Marcus

Configuration

No configuration options. Requires 2+ mentions to be considered "introduced."

Technical Details

  • Source: prose-craft
  • Scope: Scene-level
  • Method: Character mention tracking with word-offset measurement; relies on NER/character detection