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Exposition in Dialogue
Flags "as-you-know-Bob" dialogue where characters tell each other things they already know.
What It Does
Scans dialogue paragraphs for exposition markers: phrases like "as you know," "as we discussed," "you already know" that signal characters are delivering backstory for the reader's benefit.
Why It Matters
When characters explain things to each other that both already know, they break the illusion of a real conversation. This is one of the most commonly flagged issues in professional manuscript feedback.
What Gets Flagged
| Severity | Example | Why | Suggested Revision |
|---|---|---|---|
| Information | "As you know, the reactor has been unstable" | Characters already know this | Convey through narration, thought, or discovery |
Technical Details
- Source:
prose-craft - Scope: Dialogue paragraphs
- Method: Case-insensitive phrase matching against 17 exposition markers